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Essay Composition & Editing


Acceptance to the country's most prestigious colleges and universities
becomes more competitive each year. In 2007, barely 9% of the thousands of Ivy League applicants were admitted to the freshman class. With impressive grades and extracurricular activities now the standard, admissions committees often rely on the application essays or personal statements to separate students. Cardinal Education understands the importance of proper essay composition and editing, and will help your child develop the perfect essay from the bottom up. Starting with a detailed outline and logical thesis, we teach our students to write everything from an interesting introduction to a persuasive finish. Each essay is carefully reviewed by a committee of experts who deliberate the composition and direction of every important aspect, eventually agreeing on the most successful route. Our tutors review incomplete drafts as well, providing helpful and constructive comments on every aspect of the essay.

Essay Composition: outlining, thesis development, organization and style, rhetoric, persuasive arguments

Essay Editing: timely feedback, comments on essay ideas and grammar, structural redevelopment